Comment on Julie's Blog

My classmate, Julie wrote an edditorial entitled, "Keeping Students Safe in Texas." I think that this was a good post, both from a structured standpoint and that the author's opinion was based on the facts she collected. I'm not the best speller and a marginal grammarian, but nothing jumped out at me regarding those items. In addition, I think that her structure of the piece was clear and easy to follow. Finally, the author easily demonstrated that her opinion was based on data she collected and not just anecdotal. Great work.